goodbye
summer built us a house made of silver string
oh, i cried as i stepped inside.
how did you get here?
but you just smiled at me.
as we whispered stories by the glow of your heart
and washed our hands in the river coming from my spirit
i learned to love you.
oh, i cried as the sun set.
how was i so afraid of you before?
but you just smiled at me.
and yet, as the days passed, i could not look past
that mask you wore
to hide your face from me.
summer built us a house made of silver string.
oh, i cried as we peeked outside.
please don't lie to me anymore.
but you just smiled at me
like it hurt.
summer cannot last forever.
our string house fell apart,
for we had come to the end of our changing.
i looked into your eyes and pleaded for you to stay
but you just smiled at me.
we both knew.
we both knew you couldn't.
on the day you left
i went looking for a trace of you.
now i sit with that old mask in my hands
weeping.
♥
goodbye summer.
Gorgeous photography <3 and those words are amazing.
ReplyDeletethank you so much, darling! ♥ xx
DeleteYOU ARE SO EVIL FINE HERE HAVE MY HEART I DIDn't need it anyway owwowowowoowowowowowowow
ReplyDeleteMWAHH. i love you. ♥
DeleteWOW LIKE FALL EXISTS WHERE YOU LIVE.
ReplyDeleteLike, you kind of know where I live (sending me the giveaway package and such) but ack, there is not really a transition from summer to fall. It's like, SUMMER, two weeks of fall, and then snow, which was what everyone was greeted with yesterday, to the point that the electric generator, both the primary and back up ones at my school, were working half of the time, the lights were out, trees were blocking roadways, and there were so many car accidents in the ditches.
Yikes.
xoxo Morning
YEAH MAN.
Deletei can't imagine a world without fall. come visit sometime. ♥♥♥
Amazing. Beautiful. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteYour photography is stunning!
thank you, sweet emily! ♥
DeleteI second what Cally said
ReplyDeletekinda
so much said in some words and pictures thank you always addy
p.s. i tried emailing you im not sure if you got it, if not can you email me :)
*hugs you forever* aaaaand i need to go check it again. ♥ xx
DeleteWHOA.
ReplyDeletegirl, there is a reality in your writing that I cannot compare to anything else. It's one of a kind. Wow. ♥
love,
abbiee
abbieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. *squeals* ♥ thank you
DeleteStunning words. I especially love the string house metaphor.
ReplyDeleteahhhh, thank you. ♥ i had so much fun with it.
DeleteAHHH. My heart is so full!
ReplyDeleteHow do you take such amazing pictures??!
i LOVE YOU. ♥
Deletemy sissy's camera does all the work. xx
"oh look i've been impaled."
ReplyDeleteseriously this speaks to me on a spiritual level
i love your blog so much :')
i'm dead.
Deleteyou are wonderful. ♥
oh those beautiful October photos ♥
ReplyDeleteand oh, those beautiful words. how do...how do you just...how do you do that? You create and tear apart a word in a few mere lines, something professional authors can't do in three volumes of novels...just how do you...wow. all I can say is God has truly blessed you with a deep and powerful gift.
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and there goes my soul man. ♥ God is good. God is so so good.
DeleteOhhh the pictures are lovely and the writing is even lovelier. <3
ReplyDeletethank you so much! <3
DeleteOHMYGOODNESS i'm like in tears this was so freaking gorgeous how do you ever do it <3
ReplyDeleteno one heart doesn't halfway do it.
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
more than amazing, addy. you never cease to thrill me to the core.
screaminggggg.
DeleteAUTUMN MY GIRL. ♥
whut
ReplyDeletejust
happened
I think all those little pieces on the floor used to be my heart?
aw yiss.
Delete*sweeps them away*
♥
My gosh, so lovely. My heart. <3
ReplyDeletecries. ♥♥
Deletetbh: I hate summer. I'm always happy to see the first signs of fall, the reassurance that summer is finally at an end. But your poetry is so beautiful, it's actually making me miss summer a little bit. I never thought anything would make me do that.
ReplyDeletebrb i'm dead. thank you hannah. you don't know how much that means. ♥♥
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