January 3, 2016

my heart


in spite of it all
i was still standing there
and so, i knew, were you.

i had gone outside 
to watch the sunset.
and i hoped that you had too.

but i was watching from 
a clear sky
and you were in the dark.

too bad that i wished you
were somehow closer to
my heart.



25 comments:

  1. This makes my heart sad, but it's so beautiful that it makes me happy at the same time. ♥

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    1. it makes me feel the exact same way, darling. <3

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  2. <3 love seems kinda complicated ya know

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  3. Addy, stop with your flawlessness >>>>> . ❤❤❤

    xoxo Morning

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  4. this was painfully beautiful oh my. you write like an angel ♥
    xxx -nameless writing

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  5. These pictures are gorgeous, but so heart breaking. So pretty!
    ~Ry

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  6. aww that's true, beautiful poetry. the flow of words was so effortlessly beautiful. <3

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  7. my heart is just filled something...I don't really know what, but it makes me feelllll <3

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  8. Love your poem-sad, but quite pretty! I love the imagery you create with your words.

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  9. Absolutely stunning. Rhyme can be hard to make elegant and not desperate-sounding, and you nailed it perfectly.

    - Ellie
    http://ontheothersideofrealitynew.blogspot.com

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    1. ohmywow. <3 thank you. yeah. thank you.
      xx

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  10. beautiful! :)

    Allie D.
    www.alliesblogdesigns.blogspot.com
    www.friendlovesatalltimes.blogspot.com
    www.sincerelyallied.blogspot.com
    www.spreadingmyjoy.blogspot.com

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  11. Your posts are always so beautiful, even if a bit sad at times. It makes me happy :D (it's weird that something sad makes me happy, but that's morbid me for you, I guess).

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be kind.

xx