you've got that wicked smile
which rubs me raw and tender.
and you always lean down when i talk to you.
as if to hear more clearly,
but maybe to hide your eyes.
those wild blue eyes.
those wild blue eyes echoing my face.
don't look too close.
or we may drown.
so thank you for turning away.
we've got to learn how to swim first,
but someday we might be ready to talk.
face
to
face.
for now, just turn your face and your eyes away.
and promise me
that you'll be there
when i've gotten used to the ocean.
♥
xoxo
Is it bad that oftentimes when I read your poetry, I wonder if somebody asked you out?????? ;-P
ReplyDeleteBut lovely, as usual.
*ugly sobbing*
DeleteJust kidding. Every time I write stuff like this I'm like, "Hannah is screaming somewhere." XD
♥♥ Thank youu.
xoxo
SO BEAUTIFUL! ADELAIDE! UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *dies for the billionth time after reading your posts*
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOUUUUUU. *gives you cpr* ♥♥
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Holy mackerel. Do you know... do you even know how good these words are for my soul?
ReplyDeleteAw man, thank you! And I was just freaking out over how wonderful your blog is, so that means the world to me. ♥
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So deep. :') but seriously, the imagery is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteMwaaaah. Thank you. ♥
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Wow. This is so beautiful. The picture goes brilliantly with the words :)
ReplyDeleteI KNOW, RIGHT? Pictures of the sea just make me happy. ♥
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*CLAPS VIGOROUSLY*
ReplyDelete*GIVES STANDING OVATION*
*CHEERS AND YELLS AND FANGIRLS*
okay enough of that craziness hahah, but i truly love this one so much. now it's like one of my favourite pieces of writings ever. more, more! haha xxx.
(also, i hope you don't mind, but i found inspiration from the way you talked about his eyes and wrote a fiction about it. thank you for the lovely inspiration.)
AW YAY. I'm so glad. *tears*
DeleteAnd of course I don't mind. Like, take everything. Totally fine. ♥♥♥
xoxo
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amazing, amazing, amazing.... this was too much <3
ReplyDeleteThank you. love! ♥
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Stop with the perfection, please. xD
ReplyDeleteBut seriously, this is just gorgeous. ^-^
xo Adi
Why, thank you!!
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I LOVEEE THISSS
ReplyDeleteYAYY! I'm so glad. ♥
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Goodness, are you dating? Because it sounds like you are and gosh, the way you portrayed this is my ideal kind of romance/relationship... But if you aren't then girl I'm going to be surprised!
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HAHA. Oh man. No, I'm not. I just write about people who will never know I've written about them. XD
DeleteBut seriously, it's my ideal romance too. We'll find it someday! ♥
xoxo
Just replace blue eyes with brown and this is literally my life. Seriously I LOVE that you put this into words. "We've got to learn how to swim first." Goodness yes. Maybe someday... We could be best friends, I'm telling ya.
ReplyDeleteMolly Marie
mollyslittlecorner.blogspot.com
Wooooo! I'm so glad. ♥
DeleteThis was a super fun one to write. :-D
xoxo