kamikaze
tread lightly
for you walk on hallowed ground.
the valley of death is green today.
but i was born with the blood of a kamikaze.
i will crash my plane into this Earth
to satisfy the ache within me.
i walked with you beside the lake
your face brought back the pain.
of hidden things that i'd let die.
of things i'd long since slain.
where is your God?
they asked me.
where is the King you love?
but the crickets washed their words away
in fire from above.
the valley of death is green today.
and i love you more than ever.
we'll walk in peace down by this road
and learn the ways together.
I AM YOUR GOD
i hear the shout.
YOU ARE THE ONE I LOVE.
and i laugh because i am consumed
in fire from above.
tread lightly
for you walk on hallowed ground.
walked with cally until our breath came short. what a sunset. shout-out to the birds that gave a marvelous concert. i burst a heart just listening to you.
xx
You and your poetry and how you express your relationship with God. Luck, I try writing poetry (like I did on my blog recently) and it didn't work out great :'( Teach me your ways, Grand Master Grasshopper. *bows*
ReplyDeletexoxo Morning
P.S. Cally's hair blowing in the wind (I'm pretty sure that's her) = choral angel "ahhhhhh"s.
no luck, babe. just less of me and more of Him. <3
DeleteAND YES SHE'S AN ANGEL.
i was like, scrolling through the photos and then i saw cally and screamed a little.
ReplyDeleteand then i wrote your writing and i cried a little.
and then i read it again because your writing has so much feels.
*read your writing
Deletenot wrote.
this is what happens when i try to make comments late at night.
dying laughing help my heart.
Deleteshe's the best.
you're the best.
we make a great team. xx
Whoa. This was beyond beautiful, Adelaide! When you said, "tread lightly
ReplyDeletefor you walk on hallowed ground."---OMGoodnesss. So good and so true. I looovvvve it. <3
YAYYYYYY. thank you, precious soul. xx
DeleteThis exceeds amazingness! Your writing is truly beautiful!<3
ReplyDeletescreams a little bit. xx
DeleteCALLLYYYYYYY.
ReplyDeletebut the crickets washed their words away
in fire from above.
Mm, yup. Crickets are good at that.
hollaa.
Deletealso yas.
Oh my gosh, your writing KILLS ME. so so good and so satisfying to read something that glorifies our God <3
ReplyDeleteYOU KILL ME ARE YOU KIDDING. <3
Deletea work of beauty <3 cally and you and poetry are a very good mix, in my opinion. :)
ReplyDeletethe best mix. ;-) love ya. xx
Deleteflsnlfsnlfnslsskj needed this reminder (always)
ReplyDeletewhat. <3
DeleteI LOVE HOW YOU BOTH DID A POST ABOUT THIS WALK. which looks like enchantment. And the words/verses <3 beaut.
ReplyDeleteWE TEND TO DO THAT. literally talk about writing posts on the things while we do them. it's a thing. xx loves.
DeleteWHOA GIRL. This is really really amazing.
ReplyDeleteLOVE <3
Deletenot agaaainnn Addy I mean seriously this is just getting out of control!! First you go and take a walk AND THEN you go and write a MasterpiECE. IF you do this one more time I'm going to have to tell your mom and then fly all the way to Colorado and talk to you! PANDEmonIUM I tELL, YOU ABsoLUTE CHAoS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI'M GOING TO DO IT AGAIN SO YOU COME HERE TO TELL MY MOM YAY SLEEPOVER. <3
DeleteThis is so beautiful - holy crap <3
ReplyDelete~ Waverly ~
dying laughing. thanks bro. xx
DeleteWhoa-
ReplyDeleteThose pictures are absolutely stunning and so is your writing!
squee! thanks. xx
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